Today I am posting my Trench Diary.
So we had to write what we smelt, what we saw, what we felt, what we heard, what we were feeling and what we were thinking. That's all we had to do. So we had to pretend that we were a soldier in the war.
WALT describe using our senses
I could see rat running around. I can see brave soldiers sleeping on the dirt. There are heaps of guns on the dirt.
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I could hear banging noise from the soldiers shooting. I can hears soldiers talking. I can hear the soldiers sleeping on the ground.
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I can taste biscuit with fly on it. I can taste polluted water.I could taste red corn beef. I can taste dirt when i’m shooting.
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I can smell polluted air and gas bombs. I can smell dead rat on the flour. I can smell blood from the soldiers. I can smell smoke.
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I can feel dirt on my hand. I can feel guns on my hand.
I can feel food on my hand to eat.
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I feel happy and excited. Feel excited because in shooting .
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I am thinking about going home today.
I Want to go home because i want to meet my family again.
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Hi sifa my name is Brody from pcs nice work but im not so sure about
ReplyDeletethe whole being excitted and happy becaus eyou would see people die every day right next to you nice work keep it up
but thats me syning off for now bye